My Owner Wants Me To... What?!
Project is WIP, but it contains a complete story and feedback is welcome! Planned (mostly visual) updates are listed at the bottom. Recommended fullscreen to avoid weird pixel art scaling.
This is a cutesy, silly, and slightly emotional visual novel I made for Yuri Game Jam 2024! I wanted to create something simple and feasible, but still close to my interests. The result is 2 characters, 2 (placeholder) CGs, and ~10k words. Join two girls as they begin an intimate journey in their college dorm room, on the morning of the first day of classes.
While not explicitly romantic in nature, this visual novel is fully intended to reflect the game jam theme of "queer relationships between women" and show a type of intimate dynamic that I really love exploring in art and fiction!
Content Warnings
This game contains the following:
- Pet-play and diapers
- Dubious consent as a general theme and overarching element
- An unequal power dynamic enabled by the setting
- Discussion of and allusion to bathroom-related matters such as diaper use and restricted bathroom access
Planned Updates:
- Complete the two placeholder CGs
- Fix issue where Mae is still wearing her sleepytime cap...
- Maybe some additional facial expressions or some sound effects??
- Better background???
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I really loved this VN! I actually clicked on it because it had a black lady on the display image (I'm black myself). I love the text and descriptions, the emotions and the kink--it was all very good!
And, since you asked for constructive criticism: I got a little confused by the narration perspective at the beginning. It might be helpful to have the girls use each other's names a little bit more in the beginning, to more firmly cement the narrative perspective, so I know who's holding whom and who's tightening their grip on whom.
Also, I REALLY liked that I could play it in-browser, without having to download it!
This was super duper cute..!! I loved it so much, genuinely.
Some might call the topic niche, but frankly I wish there were more VNs about such things.
The focus on the feelings of the characters, too, was lovely. The story wasn't difficult to follow, and the art(even if it is unfinished) wonderfully compliments it(it's so cute!!!). The characters were also characterized well, and I love them both!!
Generally I'm just so happy to see a VN like this in this jam. Well done!!!
I'm looking forward to anything you may make next!
Thanks for your comment, I’m glad my little VN resonated with you! And ty for the compliments to my character writing. I feel like you are a fellow enjoyer of cuteness so it’s very good to hear that you liked my art as well.
Fingers crossed I’ll be making more VNs about such things in the near-ish future, so you’re more than welcome to stay tuned…!
ohh this was really cute! i've had similar difficult conversations like that, and it felt so real going through it with these two characters. i'm so interested in all the little implications made about the setting hehe... really good!!!
Ty for your kind words!! I’m glad I was able to capture something like that, and that you enjoyed my little world-building details!